Monday, February 28, 2011










I can't remove your
smell from underneath my skin
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16 comments:

  1. LeslieFebruary 28, 2011 at 1:29 PM

    Interesting. Sort of lemony and Macbeth at the same time...

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  2. LouiseFebruary 28, 2011 at 2:30 PM

    Short but rather brilliant I think, lots of different interpretations here.

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  3. JinksyFebruary 28, 2011 at 2:47 PM

    Short but telling...

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  4. The Blog of BeeFebruary 28, 2011 at 2:57 PM

    Now this is an interesting one.

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  5. UnknownFebruary 28, 2011 at 8:33 PM

    very strong
    lemony and Macbeth..that was great Leslie

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  6. Kathe W.February 28, 2011 at 9:39 PM

    I can visualize the hands scrubbing....well done!

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  7. ReflectionsFebruary 28, 2011 at 10:22 PM

    Tantalizing flavors to this one. Great write.

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  8. AndreasMarch 1, 2011 at 4:12 AM

    wow! i love this imagery. the anguish and of love lost given a body, a real physical feel.

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  9. HelenMarch 1, 2011 at 8:30 AM

    That lemony smell is one I never mind having under my skin ... under my fingernails ... even in my hair.

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  10. MartinMarch 1, 2011 at 10:12 AM

    Short and bitter-sweet. Very nice.

    Poetry24…where news is the Muse

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  11. Tess KincaidMarch 1, 2011 at 2:00 PM

    Short and powerful.

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  12. Tumblewords:March 1, 2011 at 6:13 PM

    Strong thought. Love it...it speaks to many levels.

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  13. Arian TejanoMarch 2, 2011 at 2:56 AM

    a brilliant footnote.

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  14. TrellissimoMarch 2, 2011 at 12:40 PM

    Which smell, blood or lemon. Very terse Mag.

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  15. Yours TrulyMarch 2, 2011 at 9:19 PM

    Thank you!
    So many lovely comments! I got a giggle out of quite a few of them. So kind of all to take the time to encourage me!

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  16. Kristen HaskellMarch 3, 2011 at 4:54 PM

    You either want that or you are being reminded in a most olfactory way what you want to be away from. Food for thought

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